Revision #3 – and I think I’m pretty set on these simple iterations. I still plan on making a few variants that feature the more traditional blue and gold wing, as well as a STL flag variant. I’ll probably post those here, if y’all are still interested.
Thanks again, everyone, for the feedback. This was a really fun little project.
If I can’t hand this off to the organization somehow (fat chance, I know), I’ll find a way to get some shirts and hats made.
See you in October. LGB!
by Sad-Perspective4702
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I dig the style. Think the three elements need to better flow together though.
I have been loving these posts since you posted the first sketches! Great work, I love these! I wonder if there is a way to make the music note part (I don’t know the technical term, sorry) somehow also suggest movement of the stick and puck portion. Kinda how in cartoons[, lines are used to convey a sense of speed or motion](https://static.wixstatic.com/media/e7474c_5f81984c26b64c98b03c3d87c5d945bf~mv2.jpg/v1/fill/w_980,h_780,al_c,q_85,usm_0.66_1.00_0.01,enc_auto/e7474c_5f81984c26b64c98b03c3d87c5d945bf~mv2.jpg). Maybe that would pull everything together and provide an opportunity to incorporate some of the yellow into the design.That said, I do think maintaining the music note quality is most important thing and you’ve totally done that.
Also, what you have here is already pretty freaking awesome, I hope you keep sharing your work!