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My first ever article! I’d love to hear anyones thoughts and opinions. More info in the comments!



My first ever article! I’d love to hear anyones thoughts and opinions. More info in the comments!

by IWD_Hestia

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  1. IWD_Hestia

    Hey everyone! My name is Callum Kemlo and along with Ray Rynearson and Luke Warren we form Coyotes Corner. We write articles about the Coyotes for Inside the Rink and would love to share out work here on Reddit! We don’t keep any of the money from the articles, as it all gets donated to local hockey groups. We hope to sponsor a youth team in Arizona at some point!

  2. GiveAFlyingPuck

    In the 5th paragraph you need to capitalize the I in ice since you’re talking about the team name. It may even be better to use the full name Winnipeg Ice. It just makes it clearer. That was the only negative I noticed. Seemed like a pretty straightforward informative article.

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